Sunday, July 1, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday 7/1 #sixsunday

Today's six are again from a story found in the bottom of a folder.  I think with just a bit of editing, it should be submission-ready.

A mercenary is hanging out in his favorite tavern with his buddies when a disfigured woman from his past approaches him.
"You did this to me," Caleigh hissed. "I was beautiful, but now I'm a monster, because of you!"

"You're mistaken, wench. My Caleigh is dead; I saw her die with my own eyes."

"No," she said, shaking her head,  "no, I didn't die that night, and now I spend every waking moment wishing I had, every night dying in my dreams. Because of you!" 
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2 comments:

  1. Veronica ScottJuly 1, 2012 at 10:46 AM

    Wow, powerful set up, really draws the Reader in! Terrific excerpt!

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  2. OwlladyJuly 1, 2012 at 10:53 AM

    ooo, there's a tension-filled scene! I think he's got a few surprises coming and they won't make him smile.

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